I’m trying out Diana’s challenge in response to a found image. Please check out her challenge, and other entries! I elected to try a short story, so please tell me if it is terrible. I usually stick to poetry, since there are less rules and words to misspell. π
Photo from pixabay, by Marianne Sopala
Rolland fell backwards, out of the tree house as the magic spell exploded all around him. Strange popping noises detonated like a cacophony of fireworks as he was launched through the door. He cried out in terror as he tumbled in midair, not realizing the changes that were already happening to his own body.
Odd, the impact on the ground did not feel as painful as he thought it would. And wasn’t it curious that his hands and feet seemed to naturally twist around in the air, moving almost cat-like to an all fours right before the ground rushed up to greet him?
The ground trembled as he landed, it was as though someone had dropped something very large, causing the tree house to sway back and forth.
It took Rolland a few seconds to get his bearings, but he wasn’t hurt at all. The fall should have at least taken the wind out of him, or stung his hands as he shoved them forward to brace against the snowy grass. Yet he was fine.
Well, something felt different. He felt slower, more constrained somehow. Was it some residual effect of the spell? What was that spell anyway?
“Wait a minute…” Rolland had just brought one of his hands to his face to wipe away snow that was sticking, annoyingly blurring his vision when he suddenly stopped. It wasn’t his hand at all. Why did it look an awful lot like it was an elephant’s foot?
It was!
“This is incredible!” he exclaimed. “I can’t believe it!”
“Are you okay Rolland?” A squeaky voice asked from the tree house.
Rolland had forgotten all about his friends. Michael, Frank, and the Duncan twins had all gathered together in the tree house that night for a sleepover. The last thing he saw before he was expelled out the door was Michael holding the magic book he had brought over as they all excitedly shouted the incantation.
“Hey man, you guys gotta see what that happened!” Rolland said, trying to stand. As he tried to get up and put weight on his legs, he felt himself wobble forward. He looked down in surprise at his legs and his breath caught in his throat.
“I think it turned me into an elephant!” Rolland gasped, as a feeling of terror rushed into his stomach. How was he ever going to change back into a human? They didn’t even know what they were reading when they said the magic words. What on Earth were they thinking?
“Yeah, I think we have you beat. You should see what happened to us!” Said another squeaky voice.
Why did they sound so funny? Rolland peered into the tree house, and in his haste his trunk pushed against the door frame. He really wasn’t used to being four tons of flesh and his spatial awareness was not holding up very well.
The entire tree bent backwards, tree limbs snapping and protesting from the strain Rolland was putting on them. But the house was empty. His friends were not to be found.
All Rolland could see was the magic book sprawled in a corner, spine open in a dejected heap. He tried to reach his trunk through the broken doorway to grab the book but his added weight only caused the house to move even further backwards. The book slid even further out of reach.
Shrill cries of alarm came from above the house. “Hey now! What are you doing? You are going to knock us off!”
“Wait, are you guys on the roof? How did you get up there?” Rolland asked, hurriedly he tried to turn from the door but as he moved, his trunk rubbed clumsily against the exposed wood.
His eyes watered as his trunk erupted with stinging pain from the splinters wedging deep in his skin. It all was going wrong. Very wrong.
Why did Michael insist on bringing that dreaded book over? What had possessed them to dare each other to say that silly spell? Who could have guessed how dangerous reading could be?
A delightful story and some dangerous magic indeed. I hope it wears off! Thanks so much for the story, Ethan. I’ll reblog in a few hours. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much for the prompt! I am glad you liked it, I am indeed honored with your kind words! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I like the set up of the story. It keeps you guessing about what is happening. It feels like there should be a part 2
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! I am glad there was mystery in the dialog, I often worry that I overstate or diminish the reader with too much expository dialog. I agree with you about it needing more to resolve the situation. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
Watch out for those magic books. A story from Ethan. Enjoy. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so very much!!! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
So imaginative! Great fun…. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
It was great fun! This prompt was truly inspiring, I am grateful for Diana for the challenge!
LikeLiked by 1 person
A delightful take for an Ana zing prompt! Well done!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Youβre welcome! I enjoyed it very much.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am very happy you enjoyed it! I really appreciate it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great tale, Ethan. Your skill at poetry made the descriptive story pop. Poor Rolland, I do believe spells where off after awhile!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I do feel sorry for Rolland, he had no idea I was going to leave him in an awful situation without any resolution. Perhaps I will offer him a way out in another installment. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wonderful!! I look forward to another great story and hopeful for Rolland!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I had fun reading this..may there be magic always .lol
LikeLiked by 2 people
I am glad you took time reading it! I had fun writing it π May there continue to be magic in the written word, as well as the kind hearts of those we interact with!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely interpretation of the image, Ethan…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much! Thanks for reading and the kind words π
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is brilliant Diana, I love the suspense and now you left the poor elephant … in the snow with a lot
of squeeking and frightened beings on the roof. Please, do tell what happened.
Can the elephant read?
miriam
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nicely told
I hope they can figure out how to change him back!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! Haha, yeah I think that may deserve some more prose to uncover! π
LikeLike
The reader is definitely left wondering what happens next…(K)
LikeLiked by 1 person
I might have to explore more of the situation and add some resolution in another part π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Delightful tale well-told, Ethan! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! It was a lot of fun to write! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
This was definitely a clever way to explain the complex, unlikely scenario in the photo! Definitely a fun read.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much for the kind words! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
The dangers of playing with magic.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Indeed! π
LikeLike
Poor Rolland and his friends! They certainly are in quite a predicament. π
This was such an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for the kind words! I did leave them in a hard situation, to which I take all the blame! I’m glad you enjoyed it! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re totally welcome! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Bravo! Nasty business these magical books.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! Yes indeed, very nasty π
LikeLike
Love it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! π
LikeLiked by 1 person